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What I will suggest is that you try to divide the information into several pharagraphs, where you use several sentences to connect the statements you make. You may also try to extend uppon the statements by using bi-sentences. Write what you would have said if you were to explain the information to an actual person.<br> | What I will suggest is that you try to divide the information into several pharagraphs, where you use several sentences to connect the statements you make. You may also try to extend uppon the statements by using bi-sentences. Write what you would have said if you were to explain the information to an actual person.<br> | ||
And a final hint for writing good articles, <b>always</b> read through the whole section after you have made a contribution to it. Then you can see where and how to make improvements if the flow in the text is not right. If you still have problems seeing what I am trying to express, then I will suggest that you read some good books.[[User:Person|Person]] 17:36, October 25, 2011 (CDT) | And a final hint for writing good articles, <b>always</b> read through the whole section after you have made a contribution to it. Then you can see where and how to make improvements if the flow in the text is not right. If you still have problems seeing what I am trying to express, then I will suggest that you read some good books. [[User:Person|Person]] 17:36, October 25, 2011 (CDT) | ||