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== Feedback == | == Feedback == | ||
I appreciate the information you have contributed to the Wiki, but I would like to give you some feedback and suggestions in how to arrange the information. I am mainly reffering to what you contributed to the Story section of the Twilight Princess page | I appreciate the information you have contributed to the Wiki, but I would like to give you some feedback and suggestions in how to arrange the information. I am mainly reffering to what you contributed to the Story section of the Twilight Princess page, but I see that some other contributions you made also applies for what I will be writing about.<br> | ||
What I note is that you tend to add information as individual single-statement sentences in one big pharagraph. This is not the optimal way of presenting information, as readers are faced with a big block of text that's difficult to read due to the lack of flow between the sentences.<br> | What I note is that you tend to add information as individual single-statement sentences in one big pharagraph. This is not the optimal way of presenting information, as readers are faced with a big block of text that's difficult to read due to the lack of flow between the sentences.<br> | ||