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== Feedback == | == Feedback == | ||
I appreciate the information you have contributed to the Wiki, but I would like to give you some feedback and suggestions in how to arrange the information. I am mainly reffering to what you contributed to the Story section of the Twilight Princess page, but I see that some other contributions you made also applies for what I will be writing about.<br> | I appreciate the information you have contributed to the Wiki, but I would like to give you some feedback and suggestions in how to arrange the information. I am mainly reffering to what you contributed to the Story section of the Twilight Princess page, but I see that some other contributions you made also applies for what I will be writing about.<br/> | ||
What I note is that you tend to add information as individual single-statement sentences in one big pharagraph. This is not the optimal way of presenting information, as readers are faced with a big block of text that's difficult to read due to the lack of flow between the sentences.<br> | What I note is that you tend to add information as individual single-statement sentences in one big pharagraph. This is not the optimal way of presenting information, as readers are faced with a big block of text that's difficult to read due to the lack of flow between the sentences.<br/> | ||
What I will suggest is that you try to divide the information into several pharagraphs, where you use several sentences to connect the statements you make. You may also try to extend uppon the statements by using bi-sentences. Write what you would have said if you were to explain the information to an actual person.<br> | What I will suggest is that you try to divide the information into several pharagraphs, where you use several sentences to connect the statements you make. You may also try to extend uppon the statements by using bi-sentences. Write what you would have said if you were to explain the information to an actual person.<br/> | ||
And a final hint for writing good articles, <b>always</b> read through the whole section after you have made a contribution to it. Then you can see where and how to make improvements if the flow in the text is not right. If you still have problems seeing what I am trying to express, then I will suggest that you read some good books. [[User:Person|Person]] 17:36, October 25, 2011 (CDT) | And a final hint for writing good articles, <b>always</b> read through the whole section after you have made a contribution to it. Then you can see where and how to make improvements if the flow in the text is not right. If you still have problems seeing what I am trying to express, then I will suggest that you read some good books. [[User:Person|Person]] 17:36, October 25, 2011 (CDT) | ||