No attempt, do this Thou must or else Thy work will be scattered all around the forums and Thy don't want to do this...
In other words: Keep your work in one place. It is easier for members to see all your work and it is a lot easier for you to have all your work you posted stored together.
Your drawing looks very good. I like the colors. Keep up this good work
Teehee, your art style is cute. Though, I can't call it manga. Just because it's read right-to-left doesn't make it manga. I hope you're not trying to mimic an animé art style. Because your style is unique and fine as is. Your art style has its own special name... did you know that? It's called... "Ryoga Style". Yeah. Please keep up the Ryoga style. :> Looks marvelous. There are a few quirks regarding certain stances --and that tree on the first panel, but other than that, it's great!
I once wanted to make a comic using the art style called "Mandym287 Style", but then I forgot that this particular art style sometimes resorts to scribbling and impatience, so it ended up looking like a blob of random lines. So, I can definitely acknowledge how clean your lines are and how... scribble-lacking it is. Kudos! =)