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Um sure thing, just use the recent sign up thread I posted.
What magnitude will Saga's revenge be? Mimir responded solidly. That's what troubles me. Will he just take revenge upon that group of rogues, or will he let his fury rain down upon every human being residing in Midgard?
Whether Saga's actions in Midgard invite you lot in to going to war with him, both my sister Hel and I will also take action. We both want you to know that if you Valhallans do anything to threaten Saga, anything at all, war will be coming to you swiftly.
Great prelude!:clap: Can't wait for the first chapter!^^
I left a message in your profile. And thanks for having read the Epilogue. Take your time and start reading the next story whenever you feel like it, Caeda.I just read... the entire epilouge... wow...
It was really good, Ats. I'm just not gonna read the next prolouge yet. I need some time to think about how awesome it was.
Btw, I've tried to comment on your profile before, but for some reason it won't let me.
Ten members they were overall that night, including Zeri, most of them being adult man over the age of thirty. There were two human women as well, the both of them having been beautiful and kind in the past, but perhaps now being nothing more than ignoble, wicked rogues, and sex slaves for several of the top ranked members.
"I don't know what's going to happen with me, Zeri. I've made a decision long ago that I now find hard to let go of. I've done too much damage to myself, and I have taken life. I surely am a mess, but I will be thinking about your proposal. For now, you should go. Ride hard and away from here, and may the gods watch over you, lass. I will be praying for your safety."
Atsuma said:Ten members they were overall that night, including Zeri, most of them being adult men over the age of thirty. There were two human women as well, the both of them having been beautiful and kind in the past, but perhaps now being nothing more than ignoble, wicked rogues, and sex slaves for several of the top ranked members.
It's a very interesting and sorrowful chapter. I luv all the structure you have put in this chapter ans the prologue. Great story, Angel.
Nice, it's looking good so far, i'll wait and see what happens next.
Wow, Ao, fantastic chapter! There was so much details! Wonderful! I loved how you deeply told us about the character's personalities. I just wanted to point 2 things out
Should be men
And something that didn't make sense to me...
I understand what you said, and it may be right, but I think it'll be better if it's "I have taken many lives"
I have caught up. The new story is going really well. You're improving on your mistakes tremendously (not that they were ever bad to begin with). I only caught one
In the chapter, the word "men" is in red font. I'm not sure if that was an accident or used to indicate that you fixed a mistake there.
Great work, Ats. ^^
Poor Zeri... []
This is turning into a really good story. Keep it up, oh great one.
Good chapter.
So, anyway, I don't have enough time and motivation to read the first story, so, I'll follow this one, but won't read the first one. So, if there's any important plot points that I don't know about, let me know.
Finally! I read it! I know it took me a while but now I read it.^^ Ooh, I can't wait till the next chapter!
EDIT: I forgot to say how amazingly awesome that chapter was!:clap: This chapter is going in my top three.