Here is chapter 5, 3 characters introed in the next 2 chapters ( hopefully) I'm hoping to get more villans soon
Chapter 5: Village In Ruin
"Shad, Shad, wake up Shad!" Keely said to Shad's unmoving body.
"Maybe we should slap him." Pandora suggested.
"I'm up! Don't slap me!" Shad replied quickly. "Where am I?" he asked, looking around at the bare walls, the cabinet of what looked like potions, and the man standing in the corner. "And who is he?"
"You're in the hospital, and the man is Zare, the spellcaster that was fighting with us. He healed you the best he could, but he isn't a healer though, so we should find one soon if it gets worse." Keely said.
"You got sliced in the arm, but I shot him and he fled, yelling that he will find and kill you" Panda said, absentmidedly removing, spinning, then sheathing her two hunting knives.
"We have to get to my village and warn them!" Shad yelled, getting his swords and bow from the end of the bed he was laying in.
"But you said its location is a well kept secret," Keely said
"It doesn't matter, I got to save them!" Shad yelled, running out the door.
"You coming, Zare?" Panda asked.
"No, I'm going to help the injured and gather supplies for them," Zare replied.
"Ok then. Wait up Shad!!" Keely and Panda yelled in union.
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"Are we almost there?" Panda asked.
"Yes, in fact, we are entering the gate right now." Shad said while wondering why the welcome signal, the call of an owl, hasn't came yet
It was chaos. Most houses were on fire, some dead littered the street, and it looked like the people defending were outmatched. There was an army of dead fighting them, and it looked like Joseph The Brutal was leading them.
Shad unsheathed his twin swords and started fighting the undead. Panda was attacking with her knives and looked like she was a master. Keely was growing vines and making birds attack, but it didn't affect the undead. The people defending the village were relived when they came, and they started to gain the upperhand. A female zora who looked 15 with toned muscles was firing arrows at the resistance and the helpless. Shad saw an arrow and saw where it was going. It was heading straight for Emma's head.
"NO!!!!!" Shad yelled, throwing one of his swords at the arrow and stopping it.
"So she is important to you, huh little weakling. I will be taking her then!" Joseph the Brutal yelled, stabbing Shad, picking up Emma and dissapering with a flash, along with everyone and thing that was asisting him.
Shad fell and the world went dark.
That was a little longer, I liked it.
You had a few misspelling here and there but still good.
And humorously, I did make Joseph the Brutal similar to him by accident. Same race and everything.