General Art Seth's Writing Thread

[Seth]

Here is a beautiful poem I wrote this fine evening:

Your personality is as grating as your voice
Every day I wake up, I know I made the wrong choice
My misery is complete, my life is a black hole
My confidence is shattered, the life sucked from my soul
Soon I shall end my life
And you will be to blame
And as you see me dead and gone, please do not dwell
For soon, my dear, I shall be seeing you in hell

 

[CynicalSquid]

Whoa, that's way better than mine.

 

[A Link In Time]

While the subject matter itself is despondent, I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Your rhyme scheme was basic but very effective. I felt as though this were a long speech a character from Elizabethan times, straight from the great bard's-Shaekspeare's-plays would utter. Nice use of commas for emphasis and appropriate pauses as well as an interesting simile thrown in at the beginning.