ChargewithSword
Zelda Dungeon's Critic
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- Jan 13, 2009
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This is me practicing bard-songs and rhyming. I intend to remake this in the future into something better, but for now enjoy the first part of my bard-song, the child section.
A story of the days of yore,
Before Twilight amassed and wolves would soar.
When an expansive land was not so grand,
and the horrors of war made our lore.
There once in a forest strong and old ,
slept a boy in green and hair of gold.
Soon, his peaceful life would be in strife,
and then his story would unfold.
A parasite would soon arise,
to steal jewels and terrorize.
With a fatal swing the woods would sing,
"Go forth oh child take your prize."
The quest would soon reach out to the fields.
To castles tall and gates firmly sealed.
A princess wise and a man of lies,
a quest to find treasure concealed.
Dodongo flames burst into wrath,
the boy continued his undaunted path.
The goron mold as bright as gold,
a token to the aftermath.
The zora sapphire was a piece of glass
hiding in Jabu's blubbery mass.
though Barinade's hide was thick and skin slick,
before the boy he breathed his last.
The sky is black and the town is red.
Women and children killed in their beds.
The princess flees into the trees,
her pursuer chases her with intense dread.
The child takes up evil's bane,
but much to his own disdain,
the devil man with an evil plan,
escaped to the golden land to reign.
The poor child found himself at bay.
His vision soon began to sway.
His tiny cries rang out to the skies,
that he would return another day.
Before Twilight amassed and wolves would soar.
When an expansive land was not so grand,
and the horrors of war made our lore.
There once in a forest strong and old ,
slept a boy in green and hair of gold.
Soon, his peaceful life would be in strife,
and then his story would unfold.
A parasite would soon arise,
to steal jewels and terrorize.
With a fatal swing the woods would sing,
"Go forth oh child take your prize."
The quest would soon reach out to the fields.
To castles tall and gates firmly sealed.
A princess wise and a man of lies,
a quest to find treasure concealed.
Dodongo flames burst into wrath,
the boy continued his undaunted path.
The goron mold as bright as gold,
a token to the aftermath.
The zora sapphire was a piece of glass
hiding in Jabu's blubbery mass.
though Barinade's hide was thick and skin slick,
before the boy he breathed his last.
The sky is black and the town is red.
Women and children killed in their beds.
The princess flees into the trees,
her pursuer chases her with intense dread.
The child takes up evil's bane,
but much to his own disdain,
the devil man with an evil plan,
escaped to the golden land to reign.
The poor child found himself at bay.
His vision soon began to sway.
His tiny cries rang out to the skies,
that he would return another day.
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