Other than a few issues with shading inconsistencies (they're really hard to notice), it's really cute. I'm guessing this was what inspired that Swapnote you sent me last night? ;3 There is the aspect ratio thing that Arsenic mentioned, but that might go with part of the weird extreme perspective you're working with. I like your stuff, Gallium~ <3 I like what you did with the hair most of all, though. It seems really inspired by Akira Himekawa's Phantom Hourglass Manga design of Toon Link, which I really love. <3 <3
Keep up the wonderful work, Gallium. You know, I would really love to see some more mediums from you. I bet you could really blow our noses with acrylic and chalk and stuffs =]
--You have a Wacom Bamboo, don't you? o/