You know, I rather prefer not to, and don't get me wrong, it is not that I don't want to critique your writing. I am just like that, you know? I don't like critiquing peeps work because I know that no one here is a professional. So I usually just tell peeps to have fun with their writing. At times I do point out a few typos, but not that often. So yeah, just have fun writing your story, minor mistakes like that are really no big deal.