Alright really good. Couple things though. You don't need to include the hp and mp because it isn't an RPG. We more just write a story using the characters. but it is good you included it anyway. ^^ You need to add a weakness. And you say 'likes fire magic' does that mean you can use it? or you simply like it? If you can use it, you have to put a restriction on it. ex. you can only use so much. or it makes you really tired, etc.