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I have to say this as a critic, but I recommend rewriting the whole thing and put a lot more detail. I find some of your writing bland without detail. You would want to pull us into the story, make it feel like we where there. That's the only thing that you need to work on, other than that, it's...

Wait a minute... Is Mario suppose to be in the Mushroom KingdomO.o? Oh well, be creative with your ideas:D

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!! When I tried to quit "Zelda's Diary- the 7 years" and "The Legend of Zelda- The Chain of Memories" everyone protested I shouldn't. I'm not the best writer on ZD nor the worst, but you're not bad. Writers don't write for the fame and glory, good writers write...

You just can't expect you're fan fic to be the new Harry Potter!= (meaning) You can't expect your fan fic to be so big that everyone in the whole world will talk about it and be loyal fans to you and build temples to honor your fan fic. and you.

If you're talking about me, you might be right, but you can't quit now! You're story is great and if you quit, we'll never know what happened after Tetra and Co and Link found New Hyrule! You just can't expect you're fan fic to be the new Harry Potter!

Make him effing hard. That way, it'll be tricky for Link.

That sucks... but he's really really fun to kill. Probably the easiest boss in Twilight Princess. But you should use Morpheel as the Water boss!

Oh, sorry, I was kinda thinking of... never mind... Forest: Kalle Demos (comes back to life, yes he does) Diababa, Big Manhandla Water: Morpheel (fun to kill:)) Sand: Stallord, Molgera (comes back to life, too)

I'll be forest:)! I like the short chapters. It's easy to read:)

You do know there's a edit button, right? Oh well, 8.5/10. Great job, but there's something missing... I have no clue what it is though...

Wait,I just read it it over, so I think you did make any errors... never mind.I'm a English freak anyway... so yeah... can't wait until the next chapter:)

There was some typos, just to let you know. Link told everyone about his promotion. They were now about fifty feet from the beach and could barely see each other. "Well," Tetra started, "that's enough surprises for one day. The folks at Aboda Village said we could stay there. Let's go to...

I thought the voting was going until next Tuesday... great story though...