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  1. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great job again Az! Well written, filled with emotions and breath taking as ever! Thank you again for another great chapter and I do hope you're going to write more ;) I couldn't help but to think about a BotW Lizalfos hideout combined with the Yiga hideout :P You're the best by far in my books !
  2. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    I got all caught up! Amazing as it was back then my friend. But I sense one change. Even though your story was already grabbing me a couple of years ago, I sense you have matured even more. Especially the details. You're great with that. The backstories, the inbetweens, the whole story is really...
  3. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Well written Az! It's always good te read what happened after. I still giggle when I think of Ganondorf being good :P Now it's time for you to put up the next chapter about the wedding ;)
  4. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Teehee!! Now that was one happy ending and you had quite some turn of events here hahahah! Byrne showing up was a good thing to do. If he felt really sorry he would show up and you made him show up. Now....thank you for writing such an awesome story Azure ;) I enjoyed it and read it with pleasure :D
  5. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Teehee always fun with the Moblins right? :D Great chapter Az ;) I was already wondering when you would post it but there it is :yes: Now see how Malladus willo take this!
  6. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Heheheh I noticed this before you could notify me :P This reminds me a bit of how Byrne reacted in ST near the end when he sacrificed himself. Although I can't really picture him crying :P Well done Az! You came a long way and now the end is upon us. I'm ready for the grand finale!
  7. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Good chapter again Az ^^ That is what any child would react like if these things are said to them. Keep it up ^^
  8. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great chapter Azure :D I love it. The fight is going to be heavy and I wonder how this will end. You put a lot of details in it. Keep it up :yes:
  9. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great chapter :yes: Great job and now after Rinz he will fight a much tougher opponent for sure! Keep this work up Az. It is good and I enjoy reading it ;)
  10. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    And another cliffy :P You meanie :P Now continue please :D I wanna know what happens next. All beautiful plans didn't work out poor Naomi!
  11. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Teeheee and leaving a cliffy behind :P You are very good Az! Keep up the great job!! It's fun how Regret sneakes out and Alphonse sneaks into the castle :P
  12. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    That was a good one Az :D What now eh? Alphonse on the doorstep and Regret on the other side having the same plan :D
  13. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Well that was really a very good twist to the story Az! Very very good!
  14. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great chapter Az! I wonder who this stranger is and what he is planning to do with regret. Hopefully he won't regret it :P
  15. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    What's not to like about this post? Another great chapter and I enjoy the ones like this as much as the ones with action. You're growing in your story Az as I said before. You really make a fun and great story and I love the banters going on
  16. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Well done Az! You'll keep the pace going ;) Can't wait for your next chapter!!
  17. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    I enjoy this writing so much. It's amazing how great and well written this is. I loved the whole Darunia plot. It makes me look different at him when I see him in OoT :P This is an amazing piece of writing Az :yes:
  18. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    That was amazing! I had to read three chapters and I enjoyed them all. I loved how you described everything and went into a complete detail with the battle and all. I also like how you work on the relationship between Layla and Regret and the relationship as friends with all three of them...
  19. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great Chapters Azure :yes: I loved how the Bokoblins fooled everybody. This is a thing for them to do and I could see Darunia's face when he was accused. He was mad at Link being a child so it wasn't hard to imagine his anger. The last chapter is pretty good too! The fire Temple always has this...
  20. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Oh this was so good!!! I love this! I always love the investigate a murderscene plot :D Great job. I had darunia in mind too but also Zauz. Oh well you know the answer :D Write the next chapter soon will you? ;)
  21. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Again a very good chapter Azure. You write it funnyb and you seem to grow more and more. I noticed one slight mistake "As we entered the lobby, an interesting site caught our attention." Shouldn't that be sight? That was the only thing I noticed ;) Layla keeps on smacking him :lol:
  22. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great job Azure. I laughed at the part where he got slapped by Layla. Also the goron snapping at him made me a bit grin. I know :P Great job and continue this buddy :yes: Oh wait there was no Goron :P I meant the innkeeper :lol:
  23. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Hey Az! That was a great chapter. I enjoyed it and I love Anjean. I could see her clearly when you descriped her. She is one of my most fav characters in ST anyway. I loved the eye color changing part. It fits the storyline. Keep up the good work :yes:
  24. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    There were a couple of minor typo's but it was such a long read (and a good one too ;) ) I forgot what they are. One where you posted site instead of sight and another tiny one. Okay what do I think? I love a good read so I have less critic than Vanny :P I love Rena and how friendly and kind...
  25. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    I agree with Vanny. Great chapter. Superb work :yes: I always loved Anjean (and Byrne) and was delighted to see her back. You did a great job and the fighting part with the aura was great but the determination to protect Naomi did it for me the most ;) Great work Azure! As always ;)
  26. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Minor typo ;) I loved how you descriped everything when the roar happened. Very great story and a very great chapter. I was almost like Ganon fight with then please :P
  27. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Amazing again Azure! very good and I loved the fight. It is so Skyward swordish :P Now the ancient monster has been resurrected. You are working on a great story here ;)
  28. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Hahahah that is a good one! The whole bath thing cracked me up :lol: You really mix all elements together. Now Ghirahim shows up again ;) Great job once again Az!
  29. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Great cha-[ter!! This is great! Keep it up. Now you left a kinda cliffy behind didn't you sneaky? :P
  30. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    I love the dialogue to be honest! A very tiny and small typo: Great chapter once again and the jokming parts were funny! I wonder what will happen next now they are in Nabooru. And it is your story so who cares if ganondorf is the main villain or not? :yes:
  31. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    It gets better and better! Keep it up!!!!
  32. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Just a minor typo ;) It really gets good now Azure! The whole scenery with the bubble and the Light and jabun and Zora hall makes me think of a painting. What an artwork that would be :D Whoa Danyell is tricky!
  33. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    Hahah I love the banter thing :lol: Well doen azure! I loved how you described the bosses of Zelda and how Layla and Alphone are so alike in their faith
  34. Vanessa28

    Zelda Art The Hero of Spirits

    *Claps hands and throws confetti* You worked long and hard on it AZ! Well done ;)
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