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Hello, friends! Here I am once again with a new update. This will officially be the last content update for The Hero of Spirits. This is a special chapter I've wanted to write for years, and I've finally gone and done it. Throughout the story, Alphonse has talked about how he values life and is...

Well, this is it! The last chapter update. I'm surprised I ended up posting five times in a row, but then again, I did get these all out faster than I used to. I hope to see more people reading this story and commenting in the future now that it's fully come together. This is the long-awaited...

Quadruple-posting is a new low for me. At least people who are interested get to read this all in one go. I'm surprised at how quickly I got all this out. I also still need to go back and adjust the Mystic Realm and Finale chapters to acknowledge this new arc. That won't be hard. There's not...

Triple-posting?! I'm out of control! :o It's time for the next chapter. This is the most action-packed thing I've written in a long while, so it was a good way to get the rust off. Next chapter will end the Forest Realm arc, and then I'll be adding a chapter to the beginning of the Finale arc...

Double-posting?! Please don't tell the mods. :sweat: Here's the next chapter of the Forest Realm arc. As I've been writing, I've realized that this arc will be four chapters long. I'll push Byrne's backstory as a separate chapter right before the finale, when the group is back together. Enjoy...

Wow, it's been years. And here I am with new chapters to expand the story. @Vanessa28 you may be interested in this. Also, @Rare Addict @Hylian_Monolith @Clank I don't know if you guys are still around, but I know you guys enjoyed the story, so you may like this. Any new readers should start...

It's been well over a year since I finished writing this story, and I've decided to write a two-part epilogue! I haven't started on part 2 yet, but I did finish part 1. It focuses on how everyone is doing ten years later; part 2 will be the story of Alphonse and Naomi's wedding day. I'll still...

Thanks for your comments, guys! It's finally that time. The final chapter of The Hero of Spirits is upon us. ;-; I've had so much fun writing this story, and I'm so grateful to all of you for reading it and enjoying it. It means so much to me. ;w; It's now time for the grand finale! It's 20...

Thanks for your comments, guys! I know I said last time that Chapter Fifty-Four was going to be the final chapter, but I decided it would be better to split it into two because of the length. I don't want to ruin the chapter length consistency I've kept up all this time. >.< So now, Chapter...

Thanks a lot for your comments, guys! Now it's time for Chapter Fifty-Three! Next chapter will be the final chapter. I can't believe it's almost over now. ;~; Last time I said Chapter Fifty-Four might end up being a lot longer than usual, but at this point that might have been an overstatement...

Thank you so much, guys! It's now time for Chapter Fifty-Two! The next chapter will be the epilogue of the Mystic Realm Arc, and then Chapter Fifty-Four will be the finale of the story. It's going to be considerably longer than most chapters, so be prepared for that! And now, time for the new...

Thanks so much, everyone! I appreciate your comments. :3 It's now time for Chapter Fifty-One! We're moving even closer to the end of the story. I hope you enjoy this chapter, because I spent a lot of time tweaking the end of it because I had a few issues with it. xDD Please tell me what you...

Thanks a lot for your comments, guys! Now it's time for Chapter Fifty! I can't believe I've made it to fifty chapters now. That seriously blows my mind. @_@ Anyway, I hope you enjoy this chapter! Please tell me what you think. :3 Chapter Fifty-Four The soldier unlocked the cell door and...

Thanks a lot for your comments, guys! Now it's time for Chapter Forty-Nine! At this point, we're moving even closer to the ending, and it looks like Chapter Fifty-Four might end up being the final chapter. I hope you guys are looking forward to that, and I hope you enjoy this chapter! Please...

Thanks a lot for your comments, guys! It's now time for Chapter Forty-Eight. I hope you enjoy this one! Please tell me what you think. :3 Chapter Fifty-Two - DRAKE’S CASTLE - Regret followed the guard through the hallway as they walked toward the restroom. They passed various elaborate...

Thank you so much, everyone! It's been quite a while since I've posted a chapter. But now it's finally time for Chapter Forty-Seven! The rest of the Demon characters I received through sign-ups appear in this chapter. I hope you enjoy it! Please tell me what you think of it. Chapter...

Thanks so much, guys! Ganondork's advice was a big help for me in writing this next chapter. Chapter Forty-Seven is also already three pages in out of the ten I typically aim for. However, don't expect that one soon. I'm busy with school this coming week. EXTREMELY busy. Also, Lord Vain's...

Thanks for your comments, guys. I'm still taking a break from the forums, but I finished Chapter Forty-Five, so I came online to post it. I'm still unsure about when I'll feel up to being more active again. Also, I'm doing Sign-Ups again. I'm going to need some characters for the Mystic Realm...

Thanks a lot for your comments, guys. I'm still taking a break from the forums for a still undetermined amount of time, but I'll pop in every now and then to post a new chapter, since I haven't stopped working on it. I need to keep myself distracted so I'm not constantly thinking about what...

Thank you so much, everyone! It's time for Chapter Forty-Three! I got this chapter done a lot faster than I expected. The Mystic Realm Arc will be beginning soon. This chapter and most if not all of the next chapter will not be very plot-heavy. I hope you enjoy this one all the same! =D...

Thanks so much for your comments, guys! It means a lot. :> Okay, now it's time for Chapter Forty-Two! This is the final chapter in the Fire Realm Arc. Coming up soon will be the Mystic Realm Arc, which is the final major story arc before the end of the story. I hope you guys enjoy this, as well...

Thanks a lot for your comments, guys! :> Now it's time for Chapter Forty-One! The Fire Realm arc should be over by the next chapter, and after that, there will be one last major story arc before the end of the story. So, we're gonna be approaching the end of the story soon. I predict that this...

Thanks so much for your comments, guys! I appreciate them! =D It's now time for Chapter Forty. I can't believe I've made it to forty chapters now! It seems so incredible to me that I've made it this far... Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy this chapter! Please tell me what you think. :) Chapter...

Thanks so much for your comments, guys! It's now time for Chapter Thirty-Nine! The Fire Temple will be split into two parts; this first part follows what Regret and Layla are doing, and the next chapter will follow what Alphonse and Zelda are doing. Originally, I had planned for both parts to...

Thanks so much, you guys! :) Wow, I got this next chapter done a lot sooner than I expected. It's now time for Chapter Thirty-Eight! I hope you enjoy it. =D Chapter Thirty-Eight “Alphonse, that note...” Zelda said as she read it over my shoulder. Layla and Regret came up on either side...

Thanks so much for your comments, guys! Sorry it takes me so long to post chapters, but I'm really busy with school and other things. Anyway, it's time for Chapter Thirty-Seven! This one also filled with a lot of investigation, and being the novice at detective fiction I am, I really hope I'm...

Thanks for your comments, guys! I appreciate them all! It's now time for chapter thirty-six. I tried my best to give enough clues to let you guys guess on your own, but I'm still a novice at detective fiction. There are more clues and more mystery in the upcoming chapters too, so look forward to...

Thanks so much, you guys! I appreciate your comments! :) Alright, it's time for chapter thirty-five! Now begins the detective fiction part of the story, although there isn't much in this chapter. The next couple chapters will focus on it much more. I hope you guys really enjoy this! Please tell...

Thanks so much for all of your comments, guys! I appreciate it! I suddenly had a spark of inspiration today in school, so after Art Club was over, I came home and procrastinated my homework wrote this. I hope you enjoy the first chapter of the Fire Realm arc! The detective fiction part will come...

Thank you guys so much! I really appreciate your comments! ^^ Sorry it's been taking a while to put out new chapters, but I've been really busy with school, and I haven't had a lot of time to work on this story. I'll try to pick things back up again during winter break. In the meantime, I hope...

Thank you all so much for your comments! I really appreciate all of them! I just have a couple things to say in response to Tael... You don't have to worry about that. There's no way I'd make the fight with Malladus so anti-climactic. ;) The reason for that is because I need Regret, Layla, and...

Thank you all very much! But Vanessa, that isn't a typo. That's just how Firo talks. Anyway, it's time for chapter thirty-two! I really hope you guys enjoy this one! Please tell me what you think! :) Chapter Thirty-Two I stared down at the broken Lokomo Sword hopelessly. It felt like my...

Thank you so much, guys! Alright, I know it's been a while since I posted a chapter, but I hope you guys will still read and enjoy this one all the same! Even though I said that last time, I'm going ahead with Chapter Thirty-One instead, because I'm having writers block issues with the special...

Thank you so much, all of you! Especially you, Tael! That was literally the greatest bit of criticism I've ever received! Thank you so much! :) And Vanitas, lol, Alphonse already has his heart set on Naomi. He can't be with Layla. That's why. :P Alright guys, it's time for chapter thirty...

Thank you both so much! About Regret, Van... His backstory is... Well, it's hard to explain. Let's just say the truth about his past is a big, important secret to be revealed later in the story. ;) Alright, it's time for chapter twenty-nine! This chapter is mainly focused on character...

Thanks so much, you two! :) And Van, I edited the bit at the bottom to answer your question. The Gerudo aren't evil. ;) Okay guys, it's time for chapter twenty-eight! I hope you guys enjoy this! Tell me what you think! Also, I'll be making use of a lot of the characters you guys provided me in...

Thank you both, Vanitas and Vanessa! Alright guys, it's time for the next chapter! I really hope you enjoy this one! Please tell me what you think! :) At this point in time, I no longer need you guys to participate in my sign-ups. I will need new characters eventually, but not just yet. I'll...

Thank you both so much! Alright guys, it's time for chapter twenty-six! I hope you all enjoy this one! Be sure to tell me what you think! :) Also, Chilfo Freeze and Terminus, your characters make an appearance in this chapter! ;) Be sure to participate in The Hero of Spirits: Sign-Ups! I can't...

Thank you so much, Vanessa, Vanitas, Chameleon, and Chosen_Hero! It means a lot! :) Alright guys, I know it's been quite a while since I posted a chapter, but I hope you enjoy this one all the same! And in answer to your question, Van, Naomi will make an appearance again soon enough. Just you...

Thank you, Vanessa and Vanitas! It means a lot! ^-^ I'm sorry you felt that way, Van, but I had to split the fight into two chapters. Otherwise, it would have been a bit too long. Besides, it actually works out better this way. Of course, I had to add a little more than I planned in order to...

Lol Van, Naomi is Alphonse's girl, not Layla! xD All right guys, it's finally time for chapter twenty-three! I hope you guys enjoy this one! Please tell me what you think. And don't worry Van, it isn't a copypasta of the battle from Skyward Sword. ;) Enjoy! ^-^ Chapter Twenty-Three As...

Lol Vanitas don't worry too much about Layla. She's just starting out. I bet you'll grow to like her soon enough. ;) Thank you for the feedback, nevertheless. :) Okay guys, it's time for chapter twenty-two!! I really hope you enjoy this one, and I also hope you'll continue to critique Layla's...

Thank you so much, you two! It means a lot! ^-^ Okay, guys, it's time for chapter twenty-one! I recently made a sign-ups thread, and Atsuma, Raindrop14, thank you both! Some of your characters will be featured in this new chapter. ;) Also, I want you guys to tell me what you think of Layla's...

Thanks a lot, you two!! I really appreciate your feedback! :) All right, it's time for chapter twenty! This chapter marks the point where I stopped in the original version, but this time I'm going to take the story much farther. I have a lot of new stuff planned for Alphonse and Zelda, as well...

I'm glad you liked it, Vain! And thanks a lot for the feedback! All right guys, it's time for the showdown between Alphonse and Byrne! FRIENDLY WARNING: THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND LANGUAGE THAT MAY NOT BE APPROPRIATE FOR ALL READERS. Enjoy! ^-^ Chapter Nineteen Byrne made the...

Thank you so much, Van! Your feedback is much appreciated! :) All right guys, it's time for chapter eighteen. I really hope you enjoy it! Please tell me what you think. I love constructive criticism! Enjoy! ^-^ Chapter Eighteen It was mid-afternoon when Rena’s cabin was finally in sight...

Thank you so much, Laz! It really means a lot! ^_^ Okay, the next two chapters aren't going to be very action-packed, since they're mainly for strengthening the bond between Alphonse and Naomi. Although, I'm not too fond of writing romance, so I'm trying to keep the mushy, lovey-dovey stuff...

Thanks a lot, Ocarina_Link! I'm glad you liked it! Now then, back to the regular story. This next chapter is kinda short, but there isn't much else I can really put into it. It would be better to save it for the next chapter. Either way, I hope you all enjoy this chapter! ^^ Chapter Sixteen...

Thank you very much, pop546! :) Now then, since I'm having trouble deciding how I should put the next part into writing, I decided to do something I've been planning for a while now instead: a "special chapter"! It's the story of how Alphonse and Zelda met! I've been meaning to do this for a...

Thank you very much, Vain! I appreciate you taking the time to reply for me. :> Now I can finally get this story back on track! All right, it's been a while since I've posted a chapter, so I hope you guys enjoy this one. :) Chapter Fifteen I stood across from Anjean in the center of the...