Caeda

Oh, okay. Is that a good game?

No problem......

Lord Vain read that you were depressed so....here.....

Why don't you want to go more into it? Your guess sounds good, not bad, but you'll find the true answer later. I am nearly done with the second part, just need to write a few more things.

You can pm me or vm me, whichever way you feel more comfortable with. It's not like you are going to spoil anything for anyone. ^^

You rule too, Caeda! ^^

Of awesomeness, that is.

I know, sorry, just want you to think about it for a while. What do you think will happen? Sometimes I think that through my writing people become predictable of approaching scenes. Maybe it's just me who thinks that way.

I'll leave that answerless for now.

Btw, yes, I do forget to ask for personality, don't know why. Alright, so I decided to chop chapter 3 into two pieces, else I won't finish it today. I will work on the second one, which will be the last you'll read about Bezzel, then come the introduction of other characters.

I will keep that in mind, and yes, you are right, the story is making sense so far. But as it moves on, the reader will know what's going on, and yes, might I add that you'll see much stuff resembling to the games, if you haven't already. I'm almost done with the chapter, just a tad bit more.

How did you....know what was going to happen? D:

Haha, no, of course not, she's not gonna blast herself to Jehanna. Is the story at least making sense so far?

And I've considered something...you could have Reyna like any of the lords and have a rivalry going with the girls who fancy those guys. That'd be cool. Oh, btw, I know I should have added this in the sign up thread, but I didn't. Would you be willing to tell me about your chracters' personality? If not, I will go random with that.

I already posted two more. And I am about to finish the 3rd one, which I will be posting as soon as I finish it. No Reyna yet, nor any other characters other than Bezzel, but you know they are coming. To be honest with you, the prelude and these three chapters were tied together, meaning they would be making the prelude, but I opted to separate them like that. Anyway....yeah.

I'm confused, but that's okay, I think I understand what you are trying to tell me.

How old could have Ephraim been when he took over the realm? Or Eirika? I say no more than 18, they look young to me. Seventeen is a good enough age for Damera, and you'll read why anyway in the story.

Btw, Damera's taken in the story, not in real life.

Damera is already taken, my friend. How about someone else? Like Lord Vain, or I dunno...just someone else.

Really? 10-1? Haha, I know what you mean, but the count is nearly the same. There are a few more females since I added another Princess and late characters such as Veeka and Pandora. But we'll be alright. And yes, you did say that, and you also said you wanted Reyna to have a Wo-Dao, right? I will add whatever items/weapons are missing to her profile. ^^